tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2016505486794178553.post3333823610228004531..comments2023-11-03T09:37:18.738-04:00Comments on Deana Barnhart: Odds and Ends and the First Campaigner ChallengeDeanahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17958057331230037880noreply@blogger.comBlogger40125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2016505486794178553.post-63757141091985803372011-09-13T22:44:07.962-04:002011-09-13T22:44:07.962-04:00Wow, this flooded in a few different feelings! I c...Wow, this flooded in a few different feelings! I couldn't quite put my finger on what I thought of the guy.<br /><br />Great writing, Deana!Juliana L. Brandthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15903360100714298208noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2016505486794178553.post-65763238681766083732011-09-13T19:45:06.022-04:002011-09-13T19:45:06.022-04:00Definitely "Liked" this! So full of emot...Definitely "Liked" this! So full of emotion!<br /><br />Thanks for visiting my blog, too...like you, I've been slowly but surely making the rounds to all my fellow campaigners!Liza Kanehttp://lizakane.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2016505486794178553.post-26978668905402782232011-09-10T22:56:05.500-04:002011-09-10T22:56:05.500-04:00Yay awards! And yay, beautiful story! I loved it :...Yay awards! And yay, beautiful story! I loved it :DJhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02768840794020850470noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2016505486794178553.post-69072471617567652092011-09-10T11:33:15.548-04:002011-09-10T11:33:15.548-04:00Very good! All along, all he wanted was to regain...Very good! All along, all he wanted was to regain his youth. Poetic and powerful story in 200 words. ~ NadjaNadja Notarianihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01339595239944177531noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2016505486794178553.post-74668772601008734862011-09-10T10:19:32.196-04:002011-09-10T10:19:32.196-04:00Thanks for the continued comments everyone!!!Thanks for the continued comments everyone!!!Deanahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17958057331230037880noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2016505486794178553.post-36467503149972892212011-09-09T16:26:06.419-04:002011-09-09T16:26:06.419-04:00Oh wow! This is great! Great premise and hauntingl...Oh wow! This is great! Great premise and hauntingly sad! This could become more. :)<br />Enjoy your conference!Amanda Milnerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07582468814920761586noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2016505486794178553.post-12487414521050786152011-09-09T13:37:40.809-04:002011-09-09T13:37:40.809-04:00Congratulations on the awards and fantastic story....Congratulations on the awards and fantastic story. I felt it was a fairy tale and oh so incredibly sad. Great that you could produce such emotion in such a little piece!Christine Rainshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08263694662585963900noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2016505486794178553.post-72198440976593169842011-09-09T11:56:52.518-04:002011-09-09T11:56:52.518-04:00My heart is breaking for that poor girl.
I wish ...My heart is breaking for that poor girl. <br /><br />I wish the rules allowed more words because I would have kept and reading and reading.CherylAnne Hamhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02324135447961686703noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2016505486794178553.post-38693465388544209572011-09-08T18:37:42.046-04:002011-09-08T18:37:42.046-04:00Oh wow- poor girl I so didn't expect that!Oh wow- poor girl I so didn't expect that!Alica McKenna Johnsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12159703224812368401noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2016505486794178553.post-5264635857754318302011-09-08T10:47:17.090-04:002011-09-08T10:47:17.090-04:00Wow Deana! So unique! You totally had me hooked an...Wow Deana! So unique! You totally had me hooked and I was feeling all the incredible lovey-doveyness and then Wham! - I find out the blasted guy might forget her. Like before. Aaaagh! Fantastic !<br /><br />I'm a fellow campaigner- I'm not in your groups, but I wanted the fun of getting to know more writers. It's so great to meet you! I had fun reading about you in your profile and oh my word! - I LOVE sitting on my deck watching storms & I LOVE sunsets too! I try to watch the sunset every night unless I have to be somewhere.Brenda Sillshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03702163304597782659noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2016505486794178553.post-53461162738940822702011-09-08T08:02:41.306-04:002011-09-08T08:02:41.306-04:00Jess and thepatientdreamer- Thanks!
Denise- I can...Jess and thepatientdreamer- Thanks!<br /><br />Denise- I can't wait for the conference. I am nervous too though. I feel like it is my first day of school or something. Well, a school I would want to go to:)<br />Thanks!Deanahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17958057331230037880noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2016505486794178553.post-30864145053382330622011-09-08T08:00:49.522-04:002011-09-08T08:00:49.522-04:00Alleged- You're right...except her price is a ...Alleged- You're right...except her price is a youth hungry user jerk:)<br /><br />Kelly & Bridget- Thanks!<br /><br />AliB- I'm flattered! Thanks! I was totally not expecting that one...YAY!<br /><br />Erin- Thanks, I tried to get a mini story going. I'm not the best at it that's for sure:)<br /><br />Jenna- Thanks...so sweet:)<br /><br />Damyanti- Thanks and I will check out that blogfest. It sounds fun:)<br /><br />Cortney- He's rotten to the core:) Thanks:)Deanahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17958057331230037880noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2016505486794178553.post-3299742295261196022011-09-08T05:33:58.650-04:002011-09-08T05:33:58.650-04:00So much good news in this post. I hope you just lo...So much good news in this post. I hope you just love your writer's conference. You'll find so much to treasure. I just joined the Brisbane Writers Group last night so feel pretty happy. Lots of resources now available to me and they're just across the river!<br /><br />Great learning of debut novelists being published!<br /><br />Your story was a stunner. Well done you! <br /><br />DeniseDenise Covey https://www.blogger.com/profile/07106490051555233439noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2016505486794178553.post-60787418100743170002011-09-08T02:46:27.339-04:002011-09-08T02:46:27.339-04:00That was very cool, a great twist. Congrats on the...That was very cool, a great twist. Congrats on the award to.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2016505486794178553.post-79776365140534380622011-09-08T01:28:32.533-04:002011-09-08T01:28:32.533-04:00Wow! What a twist at the end there! :) LOVE it!Wow! What a twist at the end there! :) LOVE it!Jesshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16496310224885631202noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2016505486794178553.post-73468856840428063692011-09-07T21:59:16.017-04:002011-09-07T21:59:16.017-04:00The dirty rat! And very intriguing (and sad) idea....The dirty rat! And very intriguing (and sad) idea. Well written, Deana! And congrats on getting short-listed!Cortney Pearsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00774060537148628453noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2016505486794178553.post-83982215211198312412011-09-07T21:20:47.298-04:002011-09-07T21:20:47.298-04:00I LOVED the ending. Great entry to the challenge.
...I LOVED the ending. Great entry to the challenge.<br /><br />Would like to invite you and your readers to take a look at the <a href="http://amloki.blogspot.com/p/sign-up-for-rule-of-three-blogfest.html" rel="nofollow">The Rule of Three Blogfest</a> ---a month-long extravaganza in the fictional town of Renaissance this October, with some great prizes, comment love, and of course, a lot of exposure for your writing.<br /><br />The town of Renaissance could be the place this girl is freed from her prison...would love to see your story there!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04283371140346602856noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2016505486794178553.post-66477787142899760942011-09-07T18:07:44.135-04:002011-09-07T18:07:44.135-04:00I love your story! It was definitely a bit sad, bu...I love your story! It was definitely a bit sad, but some of the best things are. Congrats on the awards!Jenna Blake Morrishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12348472716158899465noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2016505486794178553.post-28324571489645860172011-09-07T15:40:13.242-04:002011-09-07T15:40:13.242-04:00Wonderful imagery here - you captured the moment s...Wonderful imagery here - you captured the moment so well, in just 200 words!<br /><br />But oh, how sad for your MC...it's like she's his personal fountain of youth, but she only gets the few moments with him, when he's peaked in age.<br /><br />Well done - I enjoyed this!Erin L. Schneiderhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13724907482299321322noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2016505486794178553.post-33122117287760388382011-09-07T14:45:58.724-04:002011-09-07T14:45:58.724-04:00Hi Deana
I’m a fellow campaigner and for this chal...Hi Deana<br />I’m a fellow campaigner and for this challenge I have been given ten blogs to ‘judge’ and asked to short-list five. I really admire how you have told this story so well and in so few words without losing the atmpsphere and so you are on the shorlist! <br />I have informed the powers that be.<br />Well done and good luck in the next round. <br />Ali B<br />http://debutnovelist.wordpress.comAliBhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09611113709872287863noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2016505486794178553.post-34388655547976275252011-09-07T13:05:11.168-04:002011-09-07T13:05:11.168-04:00What a creep! Oh well. Nicely done. Mine is #72What a creep! Oh well. Nicely done. Mine is #72bridgethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01553619856059414447noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2016505486794178553.post-30036553083279337032011-09-07T10:30:37.956-04:002011-09-07T10:30:37.956-04:00Congrats on the awards and nice entry :)Congrats on the awards and nice entry :)Kelleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03237422917705115205noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2016505486794178553.post-21680570218570238902011-09-06T23:27:01.853-04:002011-09-06T23:27:01.853-04:00It's almost like she's Snow White or somet...It's almost like she's Snow White or something. Awesome!Alleged Authorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04869021184116123477noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2016505486794178553.post-77166033293360652332011-09-06T22:19:53.734-04:002011-09-06T22:19:53.734-04:00Thanks for the love and the comments everyone:)Thanks for the love and the comments everyone:)Deanahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17958057331230037880noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2016505486794178553.post-33160687013484610242011-09-06T20:40:55.995-04:002011-09-06T20:40:55.995-04:00Well, done, Deana! Oh, that snake!Well, done, Deana! Oh, that snake!Donna K. Weaverhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15763832177263927311noreply@blogger.com