tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2016505486794178553.post6800137381815894574..comments2023-11-03T09:37:18.738-04:00Comments on Deana Barnhart: Small Press Finalist #22 - Try Me On For SizeDeanahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17958057331230037880noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2016505486794178553.post-52597532343305338192012-10-12T21:50:57.528-04:002012-10-12T21:50:57.528-04:00Although this genre isn't one we work with I c...Although this genre isn't one we work with I couldn't resist commenting :) I like the title and I think I know where you're going with the query but it's definitely not clear what the story is about. It seems like you're alluding to something. To be honest if you're dealing with something this tongue in cheek you should just say it outright. It'll make a great impact :)abuckley23https://www.blogger.com/profile/10198891095614021346noreply@blogger.com