tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2016505486794178553.post1313948957381100393..comments2023-11-03T09:37:18.738-04:00Comments on Deana Barnhart: Small Press Finalist #6 - The Children of the NephilimDeanahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17958057331230037880noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2016505486794178553.post-52169863908598421272012-10-12T21:24:11.563-04:002012-10-12T21:24:11.563-04:00Great premise! I'm a big fan of the Nephilim c...Great premise! I'm a big fan of the Nephilim concept, whether they're aliens or angels :) Best of luck!abuckley23https://www.blogger.com/profile/10198891095614021346noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2016505486794178553.post-13822055470667882842012-10-08T18:26:02.996-04:002012-10-08T18:26:02.996-04:00Absolutely love this premise and the first 150. Co...Absolutely love this premise and the first 150. Couple wordy sentences here and there, but overall really great. Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11805206329378779413noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2016505486794178553.post-62230932011599029092012-10-08T13:09:20.885-04:002012-10-08T13:09:20.885-04:00I LOVE your first 150 words and would love to read...I LOVE your first 150 words and would love to read more. <br /><br />The only thing that gave me pause is that technically speaking, Nephilim are the offspring of angels and humans, so when you said they were aliens I paused. BUT, I'm assuming that Paxton will discover this later on in the story? <br /><br />Either way, I'm hooked by your first 150, so please send your query in the body of the email, and first three chapters attached in a Word document to jessa [at] curiosityquills [dot] com. Jessa Russo https://www.blogger.com/profile/07061996967428020722noreply@blogger.com