DARK BRINGER
ADULT PARANORMAL ROMANCE/ DYSTOPIA
107,000 words
Query:
Sometimes it makes sense to fear the dark.
In the enclosed city of New Theta, where imagination can string particles of darkness together to form monsters, people fear the shadow fiends just an unguarded thought away. Imaginatives--those who fantasize--are criminals. Lights blaze 24 hours a day. Electricity is king.
The dark doesn't bother Jenvee Cohan, an electrical linesperson who maintains cables in shadowy tunnels. Ever since she inadvertently summoned the darkness that spirited her grandfather into the Void, the netherworld outside the city, she's sworn off imagination.
That is, until a conjured nightmare throttles Agent Reese Bannon, the Bureau of Light Enforcement’s chief dark-buster in Jenvee’s sector. She breaks her vow by saving the agent’s life. He should be grateful Jenvee’s selfless act keeps him alive. Instead he tags her as his number one person of interest.
And the trouble only begins there. Jenvee’s rekindled imagination refuses to return to sleep mode. The specks of darkness won’t leave her alone. Always capering about, they cajole and needle her to give them form. As persistent as the specks and as famous thanks to news videos, Reese, the guy she’s secretly had a crush on, investigates her, further illuminating her guilt.
Reese has his own problems--starting with an extreme attraction to Ms. Cohan he just can’t shut down. He’s falling for her against his better judgment, his professional ethics and the fact that she’s an Imaginative like his brother Patrick.
Years ago, Patrick messed with the dark and died in the Void, an event that cleaved Reese’s life in two: the brief happy before and the grief-stricken crusade after. Determined to keep the dark from claiming Jenvee, Reese plans to dog her every action—to do whatever it takes to save her.
First 150 words:
Nobody said as much, but Jenvee assumed her fatal flaw--her affinity with the night particles--made her first choice for the tunnel crawl when the lights in New Theta’s Third Ward flickered and went out.
She wouldn’t ask. Not in the middle of a crisis. Not ever, really.
Although she was the newest linesperson, having only received her electrical engineering certificate last May, she strapped on her tool belt and rushed to the maintenance access to repair the faulty wiring.
Hand over hand, she scrambled down the aluminum rungs set into concrete. The illumination from above dwindled steadily until her steel-toed boots left the last rung and clicked on the access tunnel’s poured stone. Her fellow workers closed the hatch, cutting her off from the now-distant patch of battery-powered daylight and from their immediate help. She had to go alone. More people meant more minds for the night particles to play with.
I feel like this is a unique idea that has a lot of potential, but I'm a little worried as to how the romance is going to work out...though I have a feeling it could get quite tense if are both fighting their mutual attraction! I would like to read more & am requesting the first 75 pgs & a synopsis.
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Hi! Please send Sarah Younger's request querysarah@nyliterary.com with "GUTGAA Request" in the subject line and the query in the body of the email as a reminder:) Thanks!
ReplyDeleteI like the writing so far, but, like Sarah, I worry how the romance will work within the plot. I'd still love to read more! Can you send the first 50 pages as a Word .doc attachment to sl@cbltd.com? Please put "GUTGAA - [title]" in the subject line and paste the query in the body of the email. Thanks!
ReplyDeleteThis sounds like a really imaginative story and I'd love to read some! I have to agree with my fellow Sara(h)s that the romance element is concerning. But anyway, please send the first 50 pages, plus a complete plot summary, in word docs to sdemic@talcottnotch.net, with GUTGAA in the subject. Thanks!
ReplyDeleteI'm not a Sara(h), and I'm also less concerned about the romance--I like the paranormal aspect of this! (My concerns are more about the worldbuilding, but I'd like to see where it goes.) Could I see 50 pages and a synopsis as Word or pdf files, sent to queryHannah@LizaDawsonAssociates.com?
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