Monday, September 24, 2012

Agent Pitch Finalist #20 - The Astronaut's Daughter

YA Historical Romance


When sixteen-year-old Evelyn’s father accepts a position with NASA’s Project Gemini to land a man on the moon by the end of the 1960s, she and her family are thrust into the spotlight. Evelyn pushes aside shyness—and her science fair trophies—to embrace her new social life. Football player Kip seems like potential boyfriend material, and her new friends eagerly invite her to seniors-only parties. She’s even offered a spot with an exclusive debutante cotillion. Whether it’s all due to her father’s celebrity doesn’t matter; for the first time, Evelyn is in.

Then Evelyn meets David, a rising student civil rights leader who challenges Evelyn’s comfortable lifestyle while he faces racial discrimination. She’s drawn to his passion for the cause, but her friends consider an interracial friendship as unacceptable. When Evelyn speaks too readily to a reporter at a local protest against segregation, her actions threaten not only her reputation at school, but also her father’s high-profile job. Tension rises between Evelyn's classmates and the rival all-Negro high school  David attends when prank wars turn violent. Evelyn must decide whether her newfound popularity is worth her silence. If she does speak out, will her father lose his chance to set foot on the moon?

First 150:

I never gave the moon much thought until my father told me he wanted to walk on it.

Ever since NASA hired him for the Gemini project, the one that set the stage for Apollo and the future moon landing, that rock in the sky dictated my family’s every move. Especially tonight, as party guests celebrating Houston's new space center watched us like we were some variety act on The Ed Sullivan Show. I’d aimed for more Audrey Hepburn and less Shirley Temple, but I didn’t quite feel like the glamorous society girl everyone expected.

Maybe I would if I could stop sweating.

"Evelyn, there you are!" I jumped at my mother's presence and winced as sweat glued my silk dress to my back. She looked like a carbon copy of Jackie Kennedy with her bouffant and slim-skirted evening gown. "I'd like you to meet someone."


Linda Glaz said...

Sort of intriguing could u send the synopsis and first couple chapts

Hannah Bowman said...

Yes, please! Could you send 50 pages and a synopsis as Word or pdf files to

Molly Jaffa said...

I'd really like to see more of this! What a killer first line. Please send the first three chapters as a .doc and your query letter to molly (@) Looking forward to reading more of your work!

My best,

Victoria Marini said...

lurking agent Victoria Marini, here. Can you query me with the first three chapters, too?

Molly Ker Hawn said...

Oooh, I remember this one from Pitch Madness! Can I have a look? Send the full to me at hawnqueries at thebentagency dot com, with GUTGAA in the subject line. Thanks!

Molly Ker Hawn

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